Sunday, 22 February 2015

Grouping texts

1-apple advert
2-instructions
3-sport advert
4-transcript
5-leaflet info advert
6-tablets package

Group 1- imperative……………………12456
Group 2-orthography………………….  56
Group 3-purpose – persuade……….135     
Strong weak inclusions **/ sub groups

Texts 1,2,4,5 and 6 share the common feature of an imperative to engage their specific audiences to the text information. Text 1 is a poster advertising the apple brand, it states “Think different.” This simple snappy catchphrase uses the imperative “Think” to involve the audience and command them to possibly try out something new, preferably their own products. Text 2 is a set of instructions to use safety equipment such as earmuffs and safety goggles. The instructions tells the reader to “Hold…Pull…Press” these are a very effective way to obtain the readers attention so they follow the instructions carefully as they are strong commanding words and if they are not followed very carefully the users safety could be at risk. Text 4 is a phone call transcript between two teenage friends. This is a weak inclusion because a mitigated imperative is used. Person A asks, “Please give me that” to person B. This is not as strong as the original imperative “give” as it has been cloaked with the word “please” this gives the command a polite tone to it and makes the command seem more friendly and make the other person more willing to do what they are asking. Text 5 is an advertisement on a leaflet to give information about swine flu. The advert states “Keep it safe” the imperative “keep” highlights to the audience that the information they are giving them is very important and can help people. This is backed up by the fact there is a information number on the leaflet so if it is kept safe then there is a contact number incase someone may need it. Text 6 is the last strong inclusion; it is the packaging of a Paracetomol packet. The advise on this packet say “Do not take with...” the company possibly chose the imperative “Do not” as they would not want to liable for any drugs misuse that might happen and by giving advise not to take the tablets with other medication they are warning their consumers of this possible health hazard.

Texts 3, 5 and 6 also share the feature of orthography. Text 5 uses orthography to grasp the eye of the reader so they understand the purpose, which the leaflet is trying to achieve. The title of the leaflet states “SWINE FLU INFORMATION” this may be the first thing the audience reads as it is in the prime position on the page as naturally we read from left to right starting from the top of the page, also the full capital letters enhance this title to the reader. The word “information” is in the colour blue to highlight it where as the rest is in white. This may be because the producer of this advert really wants to get people to read about this type of flu and gather information that may help them reduce their chances of catching it and maybe even help stop the spread of it. Text 6 uses the orthography of bold letters to emphasize their advise on what you “Do not take” their medicine with e.g. other medication. This is highlighted so the consumers understand that there are possible dangers of doing this and so the customer gets the best result from their product this could also help spread the name of their brand to peers of the consumer.


In this final group all texts 1, 3 and 5 have elements of the purpose to persuade their audience. Text 1 persuades the audience as the only words on the advert is “Think different” this may entice the audience to search up the company and look at the products they have to offer out of curiosity from the lack of information on their advert. Text 3 uses graphology to engage the audience to try and persuade them to watch their sports channel. Pictures of sports stars are used to interest the audience to see who they might be and what might be airing on their channel. The use of the second person personal pronoun “your” in the title “All your sports on here” makes the reader feel involved and part of this advertisement that would make them want to see if they do have the sports the reader personally would want to watch. Finally in Text 5 similarly to Text 3 because it uses second person personal pronouns to make the reader feel like they are being addressed. The leaflet states “…help you and your family” by addressing the audience this makes them feel like its their duty to read this as it might be able to help their loved ones health and well being, this could almost be seen as guilt tripping the audience to read the information they are providing to help protect themselves and others and persuade them to take action against this illness.

Thursday, 12 February 2015

Grouping texts

In texts 1, 2, 3, and 4 they all share the common feature of imperatives to persuade the readers this is the either the primary or secondary purpose of all of these texts. Text 1 is a bank leaflet to advertise the Co-operative bank company and persuade the audience to use their own service. The leaflet states "please phone" This is a mitigated imperative as the initial imperative "phone" is softened by the politeness of the word "please" so the audience doesn't feel obliged to call but this is worded in a clever way as it almost guilt trips the audience into phoning them because of their kindness. This is a weak inclusion as the imperative is mitigated and has been softened and is not dominated by a strong command word. Text 2 is a strong inclusion, it is an Oasis drinks bottle label that brings the readers attention to the fact the drink has a sell by date, this is done by using the imperative "See the side of the cap" to persuade the reader to drink it because the product is best before this date. It also commands us to "Refrigerate after opening" again to persuade us that this product is best served chilled, this would possibly make the reader do this because they may feel as if the advise is from the drinks company so they would know what is best for their own product. Text 3 is a booklet that is given along with the toy the "Lettersaurus" when it is purchased. The booklet is given to promote the toy as well as to promote the brand of the toy, this is done by using the imperative "Roar, sing.....learn!" To show the appropriate audience that their child will have lots of fun and maybe even become slightly more educated from their product. These imperatives encourage the audience to share the name of their brand to peers that it could appeal to. The fourth and final strong inclusion is the packaging of a tablets giving medical advise to the user. The packaging uses the imperative "take two" to strongly persuade the user of their product to follow the medical advise as they probably wouldn't want to be liable for any drug mis-use as well as making sure they look out for their customers well being.